Single session
The First Step
$149
- ✦60-minute live story session
- ✦Concept, logline & premise pressure test
- ✦Written recap with next actions
Every Story
Begins With
A Single Step.
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Script coaching for screenwriters who have the idea and need the map. Guidance, clarity, and storytelling that resonates — from blank page to final draft.
Stronger Scripts
Page-level craft: scene economy, dialogue that lands, and formatting that reads like a professional draft.
Clearer Story
Structure, character want vs. need, and escalation mapped out so every act earns the next one.
Bigger Impact
Theme, voice, and market positioning sharpened so your script survives the room it walks into.
Script Coaching
Choose the step you're ready to take.
Feature or pilot
Full Coverage Notes
$399
- ✦Full read of your draft (up to 120 pages)
- ✦8–12 page editorial notes document
- ✦90-minute notes call to walk it through
8-week coaching
The Journey
$1,200
- ✦Weekly sessions from outline to draft
- ✦Beat sheet and act-by-act development
- ✦Unlimited pages review between sessions
The Process
A thousand miles, one page at a time.
01
Fade In
A free 20-minute call to hear the story you're trying to tell.
02
The Read
I read closely and build a map of what's working and what's fighting you.
03
The Work
Live sessions where we rebuild structure, character, and scene by scene.
04
Cut To
You leave with a draft you're proud to send out — and a plan for what's next.
About
Coaching built on the craft, not on formulas.
Thousand Mile Journey Entertainment is a script coaching practice for writers at every stage — first-time features, TV pilots, and rewrites that have stalled out. Every engagement starts with your intention for the story, then works backward into structure, character, and scene.
No template notes. No generic coverage. Just close reading, honest feedback, and a clear plan for the next draft.
200+
Scripts read
15 yrs
In the room
Fade In
Tell me about your script.
Send a short note with your logline and where you are in the draft. You'll hear back within two business days to schedule a free intro call.