Dialogue · July 9, 2026 · 4 min read
Dialogue Is Behavior, Not Information
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When a scene sags, the instinct is to add a line. The fix is almost always to remove three.
Dialogue is behavior. Characters talk to get something from the person across from them — permission, distance, forgiveness, a distraction. If a line only exists to inform the audience, the audience feels it.
One exercise: take your flattest scene and delete every line that contains a fact the audience already knows. Then delete every line answering a question directly. What's left is usually the scene.